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The Community => Creative Works => Topic started by: Matrim on 15, March, 2009, 06:36:00 PM

Title: The Fireman
Post by: Matrim on 15, March, 2009, 06:36:00 PM
I wrote this one of the few times i actually sit down and write. Which only happens like once in a blue moon.

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The Fireman

Have you ever known someone
That you knew would leave
That the thought of them leaving
Scares you to the core
Thoughts on it happening
Depress you
And when they do

It

Leaves you
Weeping, weeping, weeping
Leaves you
With a hole forever gaping

Even brief respites of meeting
Only make the hole feel larger
In the end
Time heals some wounds but
These won
Title: The Fireman
Post by: Charon on 15, March, 2009, 06:41:00 PM
It was really deep...

...until the flamethrower part. It really kind of killed it...
Title: The Fireman
Post by: Matrim on 15, March, 2009, 06:47:00 PM
I couldn't really figure out/decide how to end it. So i came up with that. Its also how the peom got its name. But names are easily changed.