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Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Charon on 30, May, 2009, 11:47:00 AM
Well, I've finally decided to do another manga, and this time it's called "Blight".
(http://i49.tinypic.com/s5vig5.jpg) (http://i47.tinypic.com/2i6yw5c.jpg)
Instead of trying to imitate the typical manga style (which failed miserably in Boy from the Moon, my last manga), I'll be developing my own style with manga and other influences. One thing notable about this manga will be that the lines and toning will be more about showing expression rather than perfecting an image to look as realistic as possible, basically meaning that colouring will "go outside the lines" and lines will often not be neat/completed, as an act of expression.

The comic now reads from left to right.

Please do not request when pages will be done - like Jupiter, I tend to work on these things slowly.

Finished Pages (UPDATED - THESE ARE THE NEW NEW PAGES):
Page 001 (http://i49.tinypic.com/nmhqus.jpg)
Page 002 (http://i48.tinypic.com/8wcdmv.jpg)
Page 003 (http://i49.tinypic.com/hwhn4m.jpg)
Page 004 (http://i49.tinypic.com/148iqs7.jpg)
Page 005 (http://i47.tinypic.com/axln37.jpg)
Page 006 (http://i50.tinypic.com/2jdhmv5.jpg)
Page 007 (http://i46.tinypic.com/9j2fjp.jpg)
Page 008 (http://i46.tinypic.com/295y3ww.jpg)
Page 009 (http://i48.tinypic.com/wjwi36.jpg)
Page 010 (http://i46.tinypic.com/14d3ddy.jpg)
Page 011 (http://i50.tinypic.com/290sdx0.jpg)
Page 012 (http://i47.tinypic.com/ev4z9w.jpg)
Page 013 (http://i46.tinypic.com/t6th8o.jpg)
Page 014 (http://i50.tinypic.com/123ob4l.jpg)
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: weckar on 30, May, 2009, 06:01:00 PM
Kraehe as in Crow/Raven, right?

hmmm, I like. The premise of the story... "romance, desruction and a hell of a lot of blood and death.", "destined to destroy the human race, but he never seems able to do so"
Hmmm, excel saga? xP

No, I seriously like it.... Rachel?
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Charon on 30, May, 2009, 06:07:00 PM
Wait, you're German? Interesting, the GS community is most prevalent among English and German speakers, most unusual for a video game XD

And yes. Decided not to use the umlaut, some (ignorant American) readers may go into a frenzy seeing a little dot above the "a". He get's his name from the fact that he has the ability to turn into a crow or raven like bird. (i.e., a Destructive Raven)

And yeah, my name is Rachel. I've heard of Excel Saga, can't say I know anything about it ._.

Anyhow, I'm going to see if the bloody program I'm going to use for doing the pages will work for me... If not, I'll just have to do it in other programs...
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: weckar on 30, May, 2009, 06:09:00 PM
Nah, I'm not German, I'm just a huge fan of Princess Tutu xD
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Charon on 31, May, 2009, 08:41:00 AM
First page is up. I've decided to tone the pages because the normal bubbling programs are a pain to use, so I'll be using Corel. Might as well get it done with at once XD

Page 001 (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x33/heimdallinc/001a.jpg)

Rough colouring style at work. Remember, that's what I'm aiming for, kids XD Although I might do future blending in the first panel.

I guess for some reason I didn't tell you all that Blight is a "crow demon", allowing him to change form from crow to human and back. Although in reality he's not either a crow or a demon, he's... uh... both. o_o

The transformation is quick and happens on page 3, so just be patient =D

I might be able to do a page a day, at most. So please don't go begging me for pages. Just remember, when school comes out in two weeks, I'll be able to do more pages!
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: weckar on 01, June, 2009, 05:13:00 PM
Not too fond of backgrounds eh?
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Charon on 01, June, 2009, 05:48:00 PM
Actually, I'm aming for a somewhat abstract look with the manga, and the unevenness is intentional, although I may clean up the toning in that page a bit.

If you look closely, you can see that the grass in the first panel looks like the wing of the crow in the second. :3

Page 002 (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x33/heimdallinc/002a-1.jpg)
Page 003 (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x33/heimdallinc/003a-1.png)
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: weckar on 02, June, 2009, 10:20:00 AM
I really really like page 2 panel 2 :)
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Charon on 17, June, 2009, 10:55:00 AM
Page 004 is up (finally!)

Page 004 (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x33/heimdallinc/004a.jpg)
Blight assumes the form of a human.

Page 005 is a chapter page, so it will take me longer and it will not advance the storyline.

Remember, if you would like full sized pages, please don't hesitate to PM me for my email.
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Salanewt on 17, June, 2009, 11:38:00 AM
Hey, this looks cool Charon. I am not into Manga related things, but this looks like something that I would like to read. You really should keep working on it.

Have a nice day.
:MercurySet:  
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Mercury Adept on 18, June, 2009, 06:20:00 PM
looks cool.  
Title: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Salanewt on 18, June, 2009, 06:35:00 PM
Hey, Charon? Please tell me, are you planning on posting the next page when you are done?

Have a nice day.
:MercurySet:  
Title: Re: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Charon on 14, December, 2009, 07:11:54 PM
I'm redoing the manga. Here are the first three (third's not fully done yet) pages.

It's a bold new style, not anything you've probably seen with a graphic novel. And if that's not enough, the whole manga will be completely panel-less.
Page 001. This is the first page, but I didn't post the original line art. (http://i46.tinypic.com/2hwg2v6.jpg)
Page 002. First pic of Joshua. A bit... well... bloody... (http://i45.tinypic.com/n4i32d.jpg)
Page 003. The fabulous antagonist. (http://i46.tinypic.com/2hezdhu.jpg)
Title: Re: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Aile~♥ on 14, December, 2009, 08:52:46 PM
First off, page 2 isn't loading properly, it may just be my connection's fault. Second, the girl on page three is EVIL? What? Aside from being Christian (please don't kill me), I don't see anything evil about her.
Title: Re: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Atrius on 14, December, 2009, 11:13:15 PM
Antagonist doesn't necessarily mean evil.  It appears Blight isn't the stereotypical goody-two-shoes protagonist either, very interesting set up so far.
Title: Re: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Tetsuya the Azure Blade on 15, December, 2009, 04:26:12 AM
WOW, it seem you've made the protagonist "evil" and the antagonist "good" and can you PLEASE kill off that goody two shoes full of BS little @#$%& at the somewhere near the end of the manga. I HATE HER ALREADY!!! (I just think that she's annoying that's all ^-^)
Title: Re: Blight (kraehe)
Post by: Charon on 01, June, 2010, 11:11:36 AM
(revival kick)
As I stated around the beginning of May, I am redrawing Blight (again lol). This time, I am highly satisfied with the artwork, and I doubt I'll be redrawing it again (if I do publish this, I'll send it to some more lenient publishers - I'm gonna do whatever it takes to get it out there)

THE COMIC NOW READS FROM LEFT TO RIGHT. PLEASE KEEP THIS IN MIND.

These pages are completely done.
Page 001 (http://i49.tinypic.com/nmhqus.jpg)- An introduction. Yes, I know it's morbid - it's about a dead man that plays the role of the Grim Reaper for crying out loud. YES DOWNTOWN DOES LOOK LIKE THAT although that's not actually downtown because most of the roads in downtown are either 1) one way or 2) 5 lanes. So it's probably like 5 blocks away from Downtown. :P
Page 002 (http://i48.tinypic.com/8wcdmv.jpg) - A two page panel, along with the next page.
Page 003 (http://i49.tinypic.com/hwhn4m.jpg) - A two page panel, along with the previous page.
Page 004 (http://i49.tinypic.com/148iqs7.jpg) - We find a mysterious crime, and all that's left are crow feathers... (by the way it's Devon Rosen and Brandon Holly, for future reference; if you don't know what Brandon is referencing you're an idiot)
Page 005 (http://i47.tinypic.com/axln37.jpg) - ...Whoops.
Page 006 (http://i50.tinypic.com/2jdhmv5.jpg) - Brandon ponders why they haven't been able to catch the Crow Hunter...
Page 007 (http://i46.tinypic.com/9j2fjp.jpg) - Well, this explains why - the Crow Hunter can disguise himself as a crow. lol. I'm really quite fond of the insane contrast this page.
Page 008 (http://i46.tinypic.com/295y3ww.jpg) - Mary is actually the Crow Hunter's (whose name is Joshua) girlfriend, but as shown by page 006 she's been dead for quite a while. CONSPIRACY
Page 009 (http://i48.tinypic.com/wjwi36.jpg) - Huzzah for Emo poetry! Wait, I wrote that from my heart... SONOVA

The next pages have not been fully edited. I'll post the fully edited versions when I am done. Until then they will be indicated in red.

Page 010 (http://i46.tinypic.com/14d3ddy.jpg) - IT'S CALLED SRS SARCASM AS SHOWN BY SRSLY SARCASTIC SUN
Page 011 (http://i50.tinypic.com/290sdx0.jpg) - ...but the mayor still thinks he's Jesus. Go figure. he must be Kwame's cousin
Page 012 (http://i47.tinypic.com/ev4z9w.jpg) - Devon and Brandon have been decomissioned... and a mysterious Archangel is taking their place...
Page 013 (http://i46.tinypic.com/t6th8o.jpg) - ...who was involved in a cult...
Page 014 (http://i50.tinypic.com/123ob4l.jpg) - So what do you do? RIDE THE DETROIT PEOPLE MOVER OF COURSE! ACCORDING TO JUPI IT GOES SOOO FAST Actually, most of you wouldn't know this (I haven't seen it personally myself) but there's a ton of art in the stations and I think the cars too. I thought it would be funny to put a cameo of Corvidae Eric in there, considering that Mr. D had played a huge influence on Blight and all... (maybe I should contact joburbur before I publish this just to make sure it's okay to put his character in-cameo). Also lol GM still exists in 2027.