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Sorry to hear that Jamie, hope you can come back!
Eventually!
Sorry to hear that Jamie, hope you can come back!
Eventually!
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Show posts MenuQuote from: whizkidhvq on 07, March, 2010, 01:59:29 AM
What do you mean by more evaluation? Do you mean in the story?
Quote from: present tenseAthos seems to accept his fate however
Quote from: past tenseMark and his friends' journey was close to an end
QuoteAthos was the first to recover from the shock of the dragons and to try and do something to stop them.Could be improved by saying:
QuoteAthos was the first to recover from the shock of the dragons' appearance, and immediately attempted to stop them.
QuoteAt that moment. Bramimond then appears and with Ninian.Could be replaced by:
QuoteAt that moment, Brammimond appeared with Ninian.
QuoteSurprisingly, she was able to use her ice dragon powers which she kills two of the dragons and severely weakens the last one.
Quote from: Role on 24, February, 2010, 12:48:50 AM
I personally find 4 as the best number, since it makes it easier to work with... but so far it's going for 8...
Quote from: leafgreen386 on 29, January, 2010, 10:16:40 PM
Am I the only one that finds the off-topicdiscussiondebateargumentcomplainingflames hilarious?
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