Evil isn't existing...?

[Lord Wolfram]

There once was revived person called Kentos.He was a noble warrior who perished in war between Lunar clan and Mars clan.Kentos knew powerfull Umbra Psyenergy. He was called Umbra Lord.
Then in battle at Magma rock. He was killed by four Mars warriors.We tried to revive him and we did it.Then after some days in weyard stayed dark and started eclipse. Kentos was killed by strong Umbra monsters and then eclipse stooped.
Alex:..
Kraden: It is not all listen to this.
There was made rule to not revive anyone.It is all because of last time when because of reviving raised eclipse.but the members of venus clan ignored this rule and revived they leader. Eclipse didn't appeared so they decided that this is all right.After two years pepole noticed that the edges of world decayed. World wittered away with no reason.After all the lighthouses aren't sealed.Leader of Venus clan understand that it is because of him and killed himself. After some months world raised once more.
Rief:So after reviving someone to weyard hepens something terrible.
Kraden:It seems so.
Rief:Lets go outside is dark. We shall go to inn and sleep this night.
Alex:what are you talking about?
Rief:It is late after all.
Kraden:What's wrong Alex?
Alex:Lets go!
They exit the anemos inner sanctum and looked at north.
Alex:It can't bee.
Kraden:What in name of...
Rief:The lighthouse...
Jupiter lighthouse is unlit...

[Lord Wolfram]

As I said 2 series in day.
there is total 14 series.

[Luna_blade]

Nice. But I have some guestions:
Who are the Luna and Venus clan? Are the members human or not?

Also Umbra=Dark right?

[Lord Wolfram]

There are 6 types of adepts(I heard)
Venus adepts 
Mars Adepts
Mercury Adepts 
Jupiter Adepts 
Umbra=Luna=Dark Adepts 
Sol+light Adepts. 

[Luna_blade]

Hmm okay. I never played DD so that's probably why I didn't know that.

[Lord Wolfram]

Alex was depressed. He deceased to go and talk with someone.Kraden and Rief were asleep so he deceased to warp himself away.Fresh breeze and warm houses. He warped himself to Imil.
He locked to mercury lighthouse and saw it. The beacon isn't shining.He went straight to Mia's house.
In house was light. It appears Mia isn't asleep. Alex knocked the dorr. Amiti answered door.
Alex:Amiti...can you please  talk with me.
Mia:who is there?
Amiti:It is Alex.
Alex entered house and stayed at entrance.
Mia:What do you want?
Alex:I wish to talk with you and Amiti.
Amiti:We have nothing to talk about.
Alex:Please son.I wist to bee with you and Mia.Just this night ok?
Mia:I think it will bee all right.
Alex: thank you Mia.
All night they were talking and were happy that they are together.Amiti too found forgiveness to his father but still had small rage to him.Alex truly felt this love to his son.Mia was happy that hers cousin truly have changed.At morning Alex said farewell and warped away.

[Lord Wolfram]

 How is he...
Menardi:It seems he have regained his strength.
Agatio:Then Where to warp?
Saturos:To Tonfon.
Menardi:Saturos.Are you sure you should stand?
Saturos:Don't worry about me.We must concentrate on our duty to kill Alex.
Karst:You are right.
Saturos walked to his room.Menardi followed him.Saturos looked depressed.
Menardi:Whats wrong?
Saturos:We are close.If we kill Alex our bound to this world will be cut of.After death we will be free.But.As long Alex is alive we are left here to wander around the world.80 years we were wandering.Arrgh.
Menardi:We will do this.Belive me.Felix revived us because he thought the bound is so grate that he could create an army of ancient warriors and we were test.
Saturos:Menardi.We have stooped Felix.It seems he got insane at eclipse.
Menardi:At any rate in world cannot happen another war or the alchemy must be sealed again.
Saturos:It's like it.
Agatio came in the room.
Agatio:It is time.

[Lord Wolfram]

Alex:Here we are.
Kraden:So in Tonfom must be an information about the time when Alchemy was sealed.
Rief:what do you wish to find in this books?
Kraden:Information about that How long weyard wasn't wittering and crumbling after alchemy was sealed.
Saturos:Do you wish to know how long?
Menardi:A year ore two.
Alex:Saturos.It's been a long time.Don't be shy show up in-front us!
Saturos:As you wish.
And suddenly in-front Alex,Kraden and Rief appeared Antagonists of the strong times.Of those times when Things predicted by ancient civilisation came true.In-front the Alex party appeared... Saturos.Leader of Mars adepts.The Warrior of Mars.
Menardi.Partner of Saturos. Known as Girl-death.The strongest women of Mars adepts.
Agatio.Second strongest men of Mars adepts.Right after Saturos.
Karst.Partner of Agatio.Menardi sister.Her abilities are very close to her sister.
Saturos:Alex.it is good to see you again.
Menardi:Well If it isn't Kraden. We meat again.
Karst:Why you are protecting Alex?
Kraden:Well...
Rief:That in not your business.
Saturos:You are right.Oh what a glow inside you.This power...Menardi do yousee this child power.
Rief:Hey!I am a men in ages.Just I am aging really slow.Just like Kraden.
Saturos:I have seen this power.This power was possessed by that water adept.
Menardi:Do you mean Mia?
Saturos:Yes Mia.But who are you?
Alex:Let him bee.I am the reason why you are here.
Saturos:Alex.Who is he.We promise that we wont do any harm to him.
Kraden:Saturos.Remember You are men of word.Because of that we will tell.Rief is Mia's son.
Saturos:Unbelievable.Tel me Rief How is she.
Rief:She is holding pretty well.
Agatio:So are we killing Alex or not?
Saturos:Not here.Let's go.
Saturos party vanished.
Rief:Help!
Agatio:Alex!If you wish to save the boy go to Island of Nalture.
Agatio vanished with Rief.

[Lord Wolfram]

Kraden:What to do now?
Alex:We have to go now!
Kraden and Alex Warped away.
After some time they appeared at Nalture.
Kraden:It is an peninsula.
Alex:Rief where are you?
Saturos:He is here with us.
At the opposite edge of peninsula was standing Saturos Party.
Alex:Hand over  Rief!
Saturos:Menardi realise him!
Karst:It seems Alex have changed.He hasn't betrayed them.
Alex suddenly casted spell and trow away Kraden and Rief.Then he casted spell which made ground splitting.Peninsula started to drift away.
Alex:Kraden and Rief.Tel my son Amiti that I am proud to have a son like him!
Kraden:Alex!We will tell him.
Then Kraden used warp stone and warped away with Rief.
Saturos:Hohoho.what a courage. Unbelievable.
Menardi:Your achievement is for nought.We will kill you and then we will warp away.
Agatio:We are not simple brutes.
Karst:Poor dead.This is it for you.
Alex:Then lets the battle begin!
[spoiler]Final battle is near.Stay with us tomorrow and you see the end...[/spoiler]

[Luna_blade]

Like said before, I haven't played DD, but I can't find information on Tonfom/Tonfon...
So did you make this place up? And were is it located?

[Lord Wolfram]

Tonfon is in DD.
There it is near endless wall.
[spoiler]I can tell you as much as I can but you won't understand.[/spoiler]
Islands Takui and Nalture are fun made islands.

[Lord Wolfram]

Alex cast Megacool!
Saturos takes 243 damage!
Menardi takes 287 damage!
Agatio takes 265 damage!
Karst takes 242 damage!
Agatio casts Rising Dragon!
Alex takes 465 damage!
Saturos casts Inferno!
Alex takes 164 damage!
Menadi casts Supernova!
Alex takes 232 damage!
Karst casts Heat kiss!
It has no effect on Alex!
Saturos:Give up!You can't beat us.
Alex:I won't give up until you die.
Alex casts Freeze prism!
Saturos takes 365 damage!
Menardi takes 453 damage!
Agatio takes 465 damage!
Karst takes 398 damage!
Agatio casts meteor blow!
Alex takes 1257 damage!
Alex:You wont beat me!
Alex casts long and powefull Venus spell!
Saturos takes 2576 damage!
Menardi takes 2465 damage!
Agatio takes 2583 damage!
Karst takes 2483 damage!
Alex venus power is fading away.
Alex:What is happening?It doesn't matter!
Alex casts powerfull Jupiter spell.
Saturos takes 2745 damage!
Menardi takes 2547 damage!
Agatio takes 2864 damage!
Karst takes 2685 damage!
Alex Jupiter power is fading away.
After powerfull strikes Alex have lost all power inherited by using Golden sun.
Saturos Party Is wounded they can't act for some time.
Saturos:Alex! Damn you!
Alex:Don't worry Saturos I too can't move.
Peninsula have drifted until the edge of world.
In Alex face was smile and suddenly they felled into the unknown...

[Lord Wolfram]

Kraden and Rief have warped to Imil.
Rief:Home.Sweet home.
Kraden and Rief went to Mias House and suddenly a blue flash of light was seen.
Kraden:Look Rief!Alex have done it.Lighthouse is shining once again.
Kraden and Rief entered Mia's House.
Rief:Mum we are home.
Mia:Rief! It is good to see you back.
Amiti:What brings you here?
Kraden: Oh it is you Amiti.
Kraden went to Him and give big hug.Kraden took of tears from eyes and said.
Kraden:Amiti I am sorry to tell you this but...Amiti your father he's...He's gone.
Mia:What?
Amiti:No this can't be!
Kraden: He asked to deliver you this.
Kraden gave to Amiti letter.
Kraden:And he asked to tell you..that he is proud to have son like you.
Amiti opened letter and reads it.
Dear Amiti.I am sorry that I wasn't with you all this time.I had to do a lot of work to make this world safe for anybody.I hope you will find forgiveness for me.By now I am going to another world.
Live your life happy for me.
Kraden has a pedant for you.It is memento from me.Ask him to look in his bag and o gave it to you.
Remember I will always be with you.
                                                                                                                                    Alex.
Amiti looked to Kraden and asked to open his bag.Kraden opened bag and gave pedant to Amiti.
Amiti wore it on and suddenly heard voice in his mind.
Alex:I will Alvays be with you...
[spoiler]The end.
Author:[/spoiler]

[Luna_blade]

Finally I've read it all. I guess it is very good. You also show the better side of Alex and that he isn't purest evil.

I only have one thing: The story jumped really fast with all those Teleports.

[Lord Wolfram]

I only have one thing: The story jumped really fast with all those Teleports.

I don't see anything bad in it.