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« Reply #15 on: March 28, 2010, 09:51:24 PM »

This is exactly why the community hack boards are closed off to the general public.
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« Reply #16 on: March 28, 2010, 09:54:05 PM »

We actually never did that in the old community hack boards. Everything was more-or-less on topic, but Role got pissed off about all the cameo ideas out of Salanewt and I, though Salanewt continued them even when I stopped.
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« Reply #17 on: March 28, 2010, 09:59:48 PM »

Let me rephrase that then, I'm trying to work on something, and you're posting distracting useless messages.  It's rather rude.
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« Reply #18 on: March 28, 2010, 10:30:18 PM »

There. I got rid of it as much as I could.

And you're right. If I'm gonna spam anywhere, I should do it in the Cbox, since we don't really have a spam board.
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« Reply #19 on: March 29, 2010, 04:03:48 AM »

Let me rephrase that then, I'm trying to work on something, and you're posting distracting useless messages.  It's rather rude.
*puts hand on shoulder* Welcome to the club, man... welcome to the club.  Ask for a serious discussion and actual help, and all you get is the nonsensical mumblings of a couple kids...  I feel your pain.

Another thing that'll probably get cleared up when you get color is the stripes - they make me think bones or something.  Weird, huh?

As for some sketch-period advice, the upper half seems proportionally large compared to the lower half.  From the waist down, it starts to look a little off.  The facial hair looks a little weird, too, but it could just be his expression.   Finally... Draw a line down the middle of the sword.  Er, up the middle of the sword.   It misses the hilt.  May wanna fix that!
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« Reply #20 on: March 29, 2010, 06:07:38 AM »

The stripes down the lower arm are just recessed & raised parts in the leather of his gloves, the band over the thick part of his lower arm is also part of them.  The recessed sections would be a different shade of brown from the rest of the glove.

Hmm... Checking it again the legs were supposed to start roughly where the bottom of his belt currently is, how I managed to miss my own guide lines that badly without noticing is beyond me...

His beard is pulled up on the left side of his face because he's half-smiling/smirking.  It may be a bit exaggerated though.

The hilt is only a little crooked compared to the scabbard, maybe he bent it and is too poor to get it repaired :P  Nah, It'll get fixed.
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« Reply #21 on: March 29, 2010, 06:30:42 AM »

I know.  Like I said, that'd probably be fixed with colors.

Anywho, can't wait to see your tweaks.  Not used to bearded characters, so that's probably why it seemed off.  I'd love to see a full team come out of your drawings, though.  Would be kinda cool. ^-^
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« Reply #22 on: April 02, 2010, 10:19:58 AM »

Alright, here's take two.  Slightly different pose, more interesting (and common for Golden Sun character art) angle, and new technique for the clothing folds.

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« Reply #23 on: April 02, 2010, 01:06:18 PM »

Looks good Atrius. His mouth looks a bit small now... But other than that, he looks pretty good.

As for the mouth, you can fix it if the corner of his mouth was aligned vertically with the centre of his eye (but you do not have to do anything to the other side of the mouth). This character looks pretty neat too (and the folds on his clothes look a bit better now).

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« Reply #24 on: April 02, 2010, 05:24:35 PM »

Okay, that facial expression is just.. weird.  It's not the beard this time, either.  It looks like his cheek is swollen and he was raised with his head in a box.  You need to make the face more round and... well, do a much better job with the mouth.

Next:  He looks like he's dragging that leg behind him...

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He didn't just get his arse kicked, did he?
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« Reply #25 on: April 02, 2010, 05:50:52 PM »

his head reminds me of a dood from lost
 
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« Reply #26 on: April 02, 2010, 08:19:14 PM »

Oh, I see that someone else has noticed that. OMG ATRIUS'S DRAWING HAS COME TO LIFE!!!!!!
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« Reply #27 on: April 02, 2010, 08:52:35 PM »

He does have a lot of similarities to what I had in mind, just needs thicker eyebrows, to shave the edges of his beard, and a couple other fairly minor changes.

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« Reply #28 on: April 04, 2010, 04:49:01 AM »

Ah, his face looks significantly less beaten up in that pic.  Good improvement.  Belt buckle seems a bit odd, and he still looks like his left(?)/rear leg is crippled.
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« Reply #29 on: April 13, 2010, 08:12:19 AM »



Hey look another character for the community hack.  She is a spell fighter, mercury adept named Ania.  Full bio will be posted later.

My scanner seemed rather convinced that the part of the paper where her feet are drawn doesn't actually exist, sorry about that.
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