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Started by RTGreece21, 29, April, 2010, 09:02:23 PM

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RTGreece21

Well, I figured that, since there are other people with little artwork topics, I would make one too. It seems fun and harmless enough, and if there is anything I have a lot of, it's art.

I don't know how much KB my pictures are, so hopefully, this first one will work. Someone made an idea for a Mars adept, and I have made a rough colouring of it just so that I can keep track of the colours. If anyone wants me to change the colours a bit, I am flexible, but keep in mind the person who came up with the idea first. Deviantart is being all @#$ (f*cking aggravating garbage) on me, so I can't upload it right now. (lol.) If the first try doesn't let me post it, I'll make the picture smaller and try again.


I think the person that came up with the concept was Jamietheflameuser or something like that... Check  the boards for a post by someone who says that it is an idea that comes from someone else. The character's name is Tiria (i think)
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Salanewt

She looks pretty good. She almost reminds me of Jenna, but I think that is what I like about it. Something does seem off about the boots, but she looks really good otherwise.

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RTGreece21

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Thanks. ^^ I like something about her boots, but I also hate something else in honesty. I was actually playing with that a few minutes ago and just gave up for now.

This time I have Dehcehira Roc. She is one of my characters, and I love her dearly. Her passion lies in dancing with dangerous, poisonous flowers found on the Fyohlr planet, a place I go to in my dreams. She's generally quiet and reserved. She is actually engaged to Shaow; a demon that is undergoing training to take on the role as the "Dark Lord" or "Satan" or whatever you all want to call him.

The next is a 3d image of a bus I made in my free time. What can I say. I was bored two years ago.

For the third one, I redrew character ideas for my brother (because his art isn't as good as mine yet) and they ended up turning out extremely well. It's fun drawing other people's characters sometimes.


Edit: I don't know why, put it posted Dehcehira twice...
"Optimistic about Pessimism."
"Want to see my good side? Hah heh heh... That was a trick question. All I have are good sides."[/color]

Rolina

They seem hit and miss at first, BUT, it also looks like it's because of how much time and effort you put into them.  Upon closer inspection, though, most of them are hits, while a few of them look like its' more initial sketch-like.  Very good overall, just remember that it's quality that we're looking for, not quantity.  So when it comes to the application, remember that it's not the amount of pics or character you give us, it's how good they look.  Works like Dehcehira will easily pass, assuming the color job keeps up the epic quality.

RTGreece21

Oh, that gives me a great idea! I know how to easily clear up Tiria's picture and make it digital of course, but how about I show you guys what I have so far on the adept I want to make? Then you will have an idea of how Tiria with turn out. And I know you are looking for quality. That is way I named the file "rough colour". It basically means that it is a reference for me. I was just wondering if anyone like the design. Like how Salanewt doesn't like the boots. I agree fully, and will work on changing them for the digital copy.

Btw, Most of those pictures are sketched or are unfinished. The bus is the only finished thing I posted so far. ^^;

Anyway, the file was big so I had to reduce it by 70% to get it to an easier-to-upload size. Here he is!  :happy:
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Atrius (He/Him)

Yes, Tiria is Jamie's character so he'd be the main one to talk to about tweaking her design.  He'll probably notice this topic eventually.

I can tell you put a lot of effort into the drawing of Dehcira, but you can't see her face!  Other than that it's pretty amazing.


You seem fairly talented, but feet stand out as a weak point in your drawings.  Feet & Hands seem to be what many people have the most difficulty with, though you seem to have hands down pretty well.

The main thing to keep in mind is that the front of the feet aren't truly round, they're skewed so that the tip is between the Big toe and the one next to it with the little toe being furthest back.  Also there's a very noticeable downward slope toward the back of the foot where it attaches to the leg that levels out at the front before the toes.

Your adept looks pretty good as well, but... Photoshop's built in pattern fills?  Really?  Since the patterns don't conform to the contours on your character the only purpose they're serving is to negate the shading by flattening out the image.
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RTGreece21

I might have to message the person someday anyway.

You spelled Dehcehira's name wrong. XD In anycase, you aren't supposed to see her face in that picture. When I finish it, she should blend in with rose petals a bit. Being drawn more to the side gives the picture less blankness and more focus on the overall picture that I am planning.

Yeah, feet are difficult, but I disagree with the hands statement. I can't draw hands. Those hands took me 4 days alone on my Jupiter adept. Both hands and feet are largely noticable flaws in my art. The bends in the clothes are a pass, but they need work. I also can't draw boobs or "private parts", but they aren't nessissary here, so it's okay. Thankfully, the boots are as they should be. I have a similar shaped pair at home I used as a reference. Thank you for giving me feedback on my art, though. It is much appreciated. I can't tell you how greatful I am that you're so nice and critical. Other people just tell me I am amazingly good, and don't recognize my flaws. It kind of sucks.

Actually, I re-shade the textures. It was actually a texturizer. I wasn't trying to make anything too amazing yet because I still have to finish the other parts, flaten, and then re-shade it. Personally, I love the shirt though. It turned out uneven, but I like it anyway. I don't use pattern fills usually. Infortunately, those textures are actually making the picture look better. I kept unfiltered versions that aren't texturized, so I could easily restore it if you want to see it without the textures.
"Optimistic about Pessimism."
"Want to see my good side? Hah heh heh... That was a trick question. All I have are good sides."[/color]

Aile~♥

That's not exactly what I had in mind, but I like it! I figured the spikes on the headband would stick out the front rather than the top, though.

Dang, you're good at art. What, you say you suck at hands? LIES. The hands on Tiria are pretty good. The left hand looks a little bit off, though.

My only complaint other than that is her boots. They could use a bit of work, mostly with shading near the toes.

I like the staff design. I wonder what you'd come up with for her other weapons? (Hammers and Light Blades are her other weapon types.)

(The boobs are a bit too big as well, but we won't get into that...)
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RTGreece21

Those hands were flukes, but thank you anyway. It's a rough colour, so shading wasn't important. I'm planning on changing the design a bit. Um... I'll have to go check what her weapon types are, but if you wouldn't mind, maybe make a description that I can work off of for the weapons. It wouldn't have to be detailed or anything.

I seen her as more of a flatter chest in my mind, but I suck at drawing boobs, so they have a tendency to exaggerate themselves a bit... I'll do my best with them anyway. It's difficult to get a model for boob form though, because most of the boobs on the internet are friggin' huge... ugh...

Alrighty. I'll get working on her new design right away. I should have a rough sketch for you tomorrow, if you would like.
"Optimistic about Pessimism."
"Want to see my good side? Hah heh heh... That was a trick question. All I have are good sides."[/color]

Aile~♥

Well, one thing I can tell you is that her hammers are small enough to be one-handed, even if due to Generic Battle Stances they end up being wielded two-handed (which they might). Probably the generic hammer sprite would be something like if you took King Dedede's hammer and smallified it so it could be one-handed.

And the top lining of her boots needs to be wider, so they look less like she's wearing generic rubber boots, because of course rubber wouldn't really exist in GS, and anyway rubber is hardly cool adventuring equipment.

For model for boob form if you need it, uh... Jenna, that's all I can really suggest. Just look at other GS characters. (Problem is, most of the official art for female GS characters has a top-down view, so argh.)

You should fix the fact that her left hand is webbed between the forefinger and thumb. The skin stretching from the forefinger to thumb starts coming out one joint too early - it's coming out of her knuckle. Other than that, the hand is perfect.
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Lloyd: Easy as pie.
Genis: Sweet!
Presea: ...Sweetie pie...
Zelos: Let's not start on this again...

[spoiler=epic mindscrew][/spoiler]

RTGreece21

Alrighty. I'll see what I can do. I'll have the sketch of her tomorrow and work on the weapons a little later. I already have new images, I just have to draw them.

Woops, lol. K, I'll watch for that! XD

I need naked models... ^^; sorry... I draw people naked, then add stuff.

One of the reasons I told you I sucked at hands. XD I'll work on it.

Thanks again for your feedback.
"Optimistic about Pessimism."
"Want to see my good side? Hah heh heh... That was a trick question. All I have are good sides."[/color]

RTGreece21

OK! I have for you, Tiria's new version 3 rough sketch! Now, I included the base for one reason: to clear up the perversion nonscence. Please look at it to see that my "nudies" are somply forms with no detail or anything. I may be a perv, but even I have limits to what I will do. Unless I need to draw it to get a story moving, I will not draw porn.

In anycase, I love her new boots! I still fail at drawing feet, but that's okay I guess. The boots like like they can take a lot of wear and tear, as well as being the kind of boots where you won't have to fiddle with holes to put new laces in when you break them. You just hook them onto the little metal hooks! I may take the extra short sleeves off because they don't really fit the picture, and she seems like should be an optimal movement type when it comes to her arms.
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"Want to see my good side? Hah heh heh... That was a trick question. All I have are good sides."[/color]

Atrius (He/Him)

I knew exactly what you were talking about, it's a fairly standard practice to first draw characters undetailed without clothes, then add them when you have the basic form.  It can be difficult to get the anatomy correct otherwise.

I like how you did the hair, and the new boots look great.  I'd take a closer look at where you placed the edge of her left breast in the anatomy drawing versus after you drew her clothing.  The perspective on her left foot seems to have been changed as well, it went from a front on view, to more of above from the right.  Really the only problems I see are that you didn't stick to the base drawing, all the more evidence of it's importance.
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RTGreece21

Yeah, but I was acting like a perv the other day,so I just wanted to clear that up with Jamie a bit. XD

I made it look like she wasn't wearing a bra... whoops... Remember, the base doesn't have to be followed at all, it's a guideline. I had to use it to make her breasts smaller. keep in mind to that the shirt is a thicker material. as for the feet, believe it or not, that's the same perspective. I just really suck at drawing feet. I can't stress that enough. The boot that is pointing down will be brought up before the inking, it's just drawn like that so I remember what goes where. I've stuck to the base for everything except for the feet, really, but thats because my feet bases suck so much it turns out better when I don't follow them.
"Optimistic about Pessimism."
"Want to see my good side? Hah heh heh... That was a trick question. All I have are good sides."[/color]

Atrius (He/Him)

Even so, since her breasts aren't large there isn't enough of them there to be deformed that much even with a thicker shirt.  You'd probably be best off not having a definite line there at all, but instead using some subtle shading.



It's pretty rough, but it's just to give you an example of what I'm talking about, and yeah, I wouldn't have expected to see that detail in a sketch really.  In yours though, it looks like it goes all the way back against her arm which she has behind her back.
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RTGreece21

OH! Now I see what you mean! On the side with the pouch, right? I didn't even draw that boob at all, because there is no way other than shading to acurately deffine it's position without ruining the picture. ^^; That line is for the shirt, not the boob. The other boob will loose more form yet too, so you shouldn't gasp "deformations!" just yet. You'll see what I mean in the rough colour, or maybe in the inked lineart.

Sorry about that. XD
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RTGreece21

Here we are. Since Jamie posts too quickly for me, I found little time to upload this.
"Optimistic about Pessimism."
"Want to see my good side? Hah heh heh... That was a trick question. All I have are good sides."[/color]

Aile~♥

Wow, great job!

That's seriously good. I don't have any good compliments available, it's not like I can say "it's far better than anything I could do" or anything, because I suck at art. I also can't compare it to the art of others without being disrespectful.
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Lloyd: Easy as pie.
Genis: Sweet!
Presea: ...Sweetie pie...
Zelos: Let's not start on this again...

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RTGreece21

Oh, do not worry. I was wondering if this is good enough to make a digital version of, as it would take a considerably long time to create another.
"Optimistic about Pessimism."
"Want to see my good side? Hah heh heh... That was a trick question. All I have are good sides."[/color]

Aile~♥

Good enough? GOOD ENOUGH? OF COURSE IT'S BLOODY WELL GOOD ENOUGH! What are you, crazy?

Wait, nevermind that...
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Lloyd: Easy as pie.
Genis: Sweet!
Presea: ...Sweetie pie...
Zelos: Let's not start on this again...

[spoiler=epic mindscrew][/spoiler]